20-07-2008, 06:33 PM
Please find attached comments.
In brief much of the answer was good BUT you do need to think things through before getting stuck into the writing. Realistically this part of the question must be completed in 15 minutes and hence have to restrict yourself to the essence- hence cut some of the prose and replace by bullet point summary lists.
Some detail is good, but err towards BREADTH rather than DEPTH. Think where you believe the marks are likely to be allocated.
In brief much of the answer was good BUT you do need to think things through before getting stuck into the writing. Realistically this part of the question must be completed in 15 minutes and hence have to restrict yourself to the essence- hence cut some of the prose and replace by bullet point summary lists.
Some detail is good, but err towards BREADTH rather than DEPTH. Think where you believe the marks are likely to be allocated.