23-06-2016, 12:10 PM
Hello James,
It is worthwhile precising the question in the first few sentences as it clarifies to the examiner how you will be answering the question.
The method you chose is clear to read, the text concise and doesn't wander. Assumptions are quoted and the use of tables is a very good technique.
Module 7 is about management whereas the answer appears to be written for a different module. If you post the question, it may assist in providing a better response. Be careful to ensure the answer is applicable for the module it is in and what principles the module is trying to get you to explain.
Jerry
It is worthwhile precising the question in the first few sentences as it clarifies to the examiner how you will be answering the question.
The method you chose is clear to read, the text concise and doesn't wander. Assumptions are quoted and the use of tables is a very good technique.
Module 7 is about management whereas the answer appears to be written for a different module. If you post the question, it may assist in providing a better response. Be careful to ensure the answer is applicable for the module it is in and what principles the module is trying to get you to explain.
Jerry
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